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Adde , Lay upon thy ears , this silken Breath
04-18-2017, 10:00 PM #1
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Same Artist of " Lover you should'a come over "

This song alone , inspired so many of my own .

Last Goodbye , by Jeff Buckley .

04-18-2017, 10:14 PM #2
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~~~~~~~ Song ~~~~~~

I'll write one as I listen to this

~~~~~~~~~ Song ~~~~~~~~~~~

Seems ,

Not long fore ,, the night lays the day
to rest

As sleep upon our door
knocks ,,
To say goodnight ,, and we past
our test
Yes , we may run to rest

Well ,,, all before has come
now ,, has gone ,,,
and ,,,
Yes ,,, we past ,,, past our test
Lovers ,,, What we were , as one ,,
Complete together ,
Yes ,, won we have ,,, that Test

Tomorrow ,, Rise another Sun

Alone together again
alone as one
wooo ,,
Lovers ,,, what we were as One ,,

Tides roll out and back in again
Life's rolling us apart ,,,
ah but ,,, but for such a short while ,,,

then again ,,, we come
together once again ,,,
create between our love
our special smiles ,,,,

Breath ,,,,,,,,,,,

Then Sojourn ,,, into the Sun ,,
Into the light of my heart
In my Arms ,, meld ,,, meld as One
Wanton Love ,,,, cannot ever ,,
be apart ,,,,,,

See ,,,,,,,

Then , Just where we've been at times ,,
a little less ,, and just a small part more ,,
Together ,, embrace ,,, slow now ,,
fall to the floor ,,,,
Fall to the floor ,,,

Please ,,,,

Find inside ,,,
In there where love resides ,,,

Find us there ,,,,

Find us there ,,,
Where love resides
Where desire provides the Drive ,,
Inside ,, and so alive
as Love provides ,,,

Alive ,,,

~~~~~ Edit not finished ~

gonna be a long one I can tell .

Where


~~~~~~~~~~~~ Continue later ~~~~~~~~~~~
04-18-2017, 10:31 PM #3
Cynicalabsurdance Member
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~~~~~~ Lyrics for " Last Goodbye " ~~~~~~~~~

Jeff Buckley ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Last Goodbye ~~~~~~~~~~

This is our last goodbye
I hate to feel the love between us die
But it's over
Just hear this and then I'll go
You gave me more to live for
More than you'll ever know
This is our last embrace
Must I dream and always see your face?
Why can't we overcome this wall?
Baby, maybe its just because you didn't know you at all
Kiss me, please kiss me
But kiss me out of desire, babe, not consolation
Oh, you know it makes me so angry
'Cause I know that in time, I'll only make you cry
This is our last goodbye
Did you say, "No, this can't happen to me"
Did you rush to the phone to call
Was there a voice unkind in the back of your mind
Saying maybe you didn't know him at all
You didn't know him at all, oh oh, ya didn't know
Ooo didn't know
Well, the bells out in the church tower chime
Burning clues into this heart of mine
Thinking so hard on her soft eyes
And the memories, offer signs that it's over
Over ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ End ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

If ever ya had to say goodbye forever to a Love ,,,,,

too much today , too many of them lately ,,,

Like a Mass Exodus for back home .
04-19-2017, 12:12 AM #4
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Quote : ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

" Well, the bells out in the church tower chime
Burning clues into this heart of mine
Thinking so hard on her soft eyes " ~~~~~~~~~

Intense ?

Indeed ,,,

when ya write man , ya feel in textured patterns , where the Heart spills itself across
a Page ,,, per those Textures ,,,

" I turned my Cheek left , to see her eyes ,,, and fell into them ,,, and in Love "

That is from an event , where , I had the first contact with a Lady , that I would forever Love ,,

Love at First sight ,,, tripped and fell purposely head first in .
04-20-2017, 05:38 PM #5
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Edited the song , jebus ,,, is that a Bug ?
04-20-2017, 11:19 PM #6
nobody Member
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Remember, You once gave me permission to use some lyrics you spontaneously  wrote.
hypnotoad.gif

well... thy re saved somewhere on this comp and prolly in the archives of JR's  Archives.

 Nobody, Has a need to know about anything!
04-20-2017, 11:59 PM #7
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(04-20-2017, 11:19 PM)nobody Wrote:  Remember, You once gave me permission to use some lyrics you spontaneously  wrote.
hypnotoad.gif

well... thy re saved somewhere on this comp and prolly in the archives of JR's  Archives.

As long as you do some damage with them ,,, you're welcome . tee hee
04-21-2017, 12:03 AM #8
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Quote Last Line :

" Please ,,,,

Find inside ,,,
In there where love resides ,,,

Find us there ,,,,

~~~~~~~~~~ End Quote ~~~~~~~~

THAT one , that one right there , The cure for any bump in any relationship .
04-25-2017, 03:40 AM #9
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Soon as I can afford some new Socks , and get 'em on my Feet ,,

I'm gonna finish that Song I was writing up there .

Got a few verses beating little dents in my mind , that
need to be added in ,,,

Boogie Two Shoes Children ,,, down to the Big Milk Store .
05-06-2017, 03:03 AM #10
Cynicalabsurdance Member
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Hang on
Inspiration in the Air ,,,

Cometh Forth ,, the flood of Verse ,, be it real
or scribble ,,
hang in there ,,,
My Fingers are about to Dribble .
05-06-2017, 03:12 AM #11
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Shhhhhhhhhhh,

( Gong insert )

" Full ,,, the Feel ,, man ,,,
electricity ,, within ,,
Tingle with the Feel ,,
oh man , stunned ,,
nothing is so real ,,,

Burning ,,
Feel ,,,

Now go ,,, create something Beautiful
from your Heart,,,
let the hands ,,
create from all you feel ,,
Go Child , depart ,,,
run home
Home to your Art ,,,

~~~~~~~~~ woz ~~~~~~~~~~~~
05-06-2017, 06:06 AM #12
Nomadic Wanderer Member
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You a musician dude?
05-06-2017, 06:25 PM #13
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I've always wondered what I am

whatever I am , it's got a bunch of pieces in it ,
However , it'd be nice to get the Puzzle finished before I leave the World .

How's about you NW , Artist ? Musician ? Poet ? Inventor ?

I'd wager you have all of those in you .
05-06-2017, 07:00 PM #14
Adde Member
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He's got a great voice CA! How did I miss this thread? emo-daj.gif
05-06-2017, 08:44 PM #15
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(05-06-2017, 07:00 PM)Adde Wrote:  He's got a great voice CA! How did I miss this thread? emo-daj.gif

Indeed , and knows how to use it ,

with emotion
and ,,

without a Phaser ,



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