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04-01-2017, 06:34 PM #1
Cynicalabsurdance Member
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FOUND IT !

I looked everywhere for a copy of this song ,,
someone mentioned I wrote a song on a forum
that they really liked

I couldn't find it
it was here the whole time



~~~~~ Song ~~~

If you'll listen

I'll tell a story you can feel

Words form and glisten
for they're just that real

I tell the tale
as you receive

how I fought the Imps of hell
who so many they did deceive

How once the nights brought Peace
and those times when freedom reigned
bringing Earth it's calming release
and anger was disdained

I'll tell the story
if you listen with intent

about the Knights of old
and from whence they were sent

About the kingdom of the Sun
Moon and almost all the stars

where Angels make the smiles
while playing softly
pearled guitars

Lost Time is never found
once gone
never comes back around

lost love
is the hardest loss
I've found

wishes whisper like
soft melodies
in the ears of children
to wash away
their miseries

Lost loves
escape by carelessness

lost from lack
of attention
when all it took was maybe
one more caress

Lost time forgets after awhile
you get nothing back
when we forget to use
our smiles

Lost chances
and a missed love

leave silent glances
toward skies above

seeking that cloud nine
where it's believed
heaven waits
and life runs fine

Lost Time
is never found

it passes and never returns
home .

And they sat there
eyes so near
to one another

wondering exactly where
they learned the fear
losing the love
of they're brother

Seems simple to me
that lost love
cannot never be regained
lest we learn to love
learn to love again

seems easy enough to see
lost love
may have remained
best we learn to love again

Say what you will
Take what you need

it's all due to your will
thoughts are the seed

Better take your time
use it wise
cause once it's gone

you're gonna find
even the skies
seem fallen down

Lost in a moment
wrapped in twine
lose what you might
I'll hold on
to mine
cause
it's worth this man's time
to hold to love
love this damned fine

Listen
and I'll sing you away
to a time
we all knew
and let slip away

The song rambles
loose
and now it's free
Time as well rambles
loose
just as free

Believe I'll ramble
some say
I'm a little too free

I believe it's all a gamble
no matter which I wish to be

So why not follow
that drummer
of my own

leave my tomorrow
and fate
to the roll of the bones

Better take what you can
and run on home

some have no reasons
to ever roam

I'll lose no time on the road
for motion is a step ahead

heard it told
stagnant is for the dead

Time rolls on
as so do I
I'll come back home
right after I die

But til then
wouldn't watch for me
not a matter of when
it's a matter of
Eternity .


~~~~~~~~ End ~~~~~
04-01-2017, 07:29 PM #2
Stiggy Member
Posts:201 Threads:21 Joined:Apr 2016
hi5.gif Nice!
04-01-2017, 09:15 PM #3
Cynicalabsurdance Member
Posts:7,515 Threads:180 Joined:Feb 2011
Thanks Stig's
it was channeled , I can't Rhyme with time


uh ,,, I mean ,,, worth a dime
04-02-2017, 12:02 AM #4
JayRodney ⓐⓛⓘⓔⓝ
Posts:31,624 Threads:1,567 Joined:Feb 2011
Great material! Drop#D tuning on acoustic.

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04-02-2017, 03:06 AM #5
Cynicalabsurdance Member
Posts:7,515 Threads:180 Joined:Feb 2011
Yepper
Drop D on 12 string acoustic in fact .

try tuning that ,, sheebus

The Song , written , I believe , with a Lady in mind as inspiration .

What we could have had together , and now when we realize it ,,,

whew boy ,,, way late in life ,, add the fact I'm a Traveler ,,, not
bound to one single place ,,, no relationship is going to work
with my No Moss Feet screaming MOVE ,,,

so as you read it
think about those moments when that lover and you had
the perfect opportunity to become one ,,,,

yet ,, ya missed it ,,, somehow ,,, it just didn't happen ,,,

and now ,,, years later ,,, ya meet up again ,,, and ya can't do it cause
of the situation both are in ,,,

ah what might have been ,, Lost chances ,,,
04-02-2017, 03:11 AM #6
Cynicalabsurdance Member
Posts:7,515 Threads:180 Joined:Feb 2011
This short Verse :::::::::::::

" wishes whisper like
soft melodies
in the ears of children
to wash away
their miseries
~~~~~~~~~~~

Ya see , long time since I wrote it ,,,

as I read it ,,, How does stuff like that come out of me ,,
especially ,, off the top of my head as I write ?

so it's channeled man
gotta be
04-19-2017, 11:45 PM #7
Cynicalabsurdance Member
Posts:7,515 Threads:180 Joined:Feb 2011
And so ,,,
it came to pass
That Moment of discovery ,
where ,,
we regain our past
That Moment of Recovery
where ,,,
we again Obtain
that which was first
not last ,,,,

Said Self to no one
" Can we be friends "

No one answered
" It all depends "

Self again " On what I'd like to know "
No one came back with ,,,
" The Sale of your Soul "

What Self Loving Creature
would engage such a thing

No one Promised : " Only the insane "

" I'm not Crazy , just a bit Dim "

No one complained :
" Then go , never Sin again "

Said ,,,
Go,,, never Sin again
Just go ,,,
Sin no more


as the Angels sighed a long gone Tune
The Demons cried ,,,, he's left us ,, far too soon ,,,

And so ,,,
Came the Mounted Man on His Steed
saying : " What for , is the Need "

Peasants answered :
" Away Stranger , take this Pail of Greed "

Shadow line upon the Ridge
where it runs clean down ,,
unto the Stone age Bridge
Shines in the Sunrise
dividing Day from Night ,,,

on a clear Morn , watch for the Knight ,,,
That Mounted Man on His Steed ,,,
The one who stole from us ,,,,
all of our Greed ,,,,,

Yea , Said GO ,,,, never Sin again

Said Go ,,, just Go ,,,
and Sin no more ,,,

Just leave me Friend ,,,
and try not to ,,,
slam the Door ,,

Out walks Self
into the Gathering Storm ,,
Feeling far more Crazy ,,
a bit more ,,,,,out of Norm ,,,
Into the Lighting and Rain ,,,
where Clouds gather up those
who are,,,
Certainly judged insane ,,,

Self Delusion ,,, fell Ill that Day ,,,
No cure to be found in the Land
Self Delusion ,, in their Crazy way ,,,
Lost their mind out of Hand ,,,

just to find it again ,,,
just West ,, of No Where ,,,
That impossible Land ...... ~~~~~~

Go Forth ,,, and ,,, Sin no more ,,,
You may be the Next Self ,,,
To Walk through that Door ,,, ~~~~~~~

~~~~ Snowsongs1995 ~~~~~~
04-19-2017, 11:50 PM #8
Cynicalabsurdance Member
Posts:7,515 Threads:180 Joined:Feb 2011
Said : ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

" If you'll listen

I'll tell a story you can feel

Words form and glisten
for they're just that real """""""""""""""""

~~~~~~~~~~~~ And so it has come to pass ~~~~~~~~~~~
04-20-2017, 01:43 AM #9
Accidental Stoner Member
Posts:8,405 Threads:66 Joined:Feb 2011
(04-02-2017, 03:11 AM)Cynicalabsurdance Wrote:  This short Verse :::::::::::::

" wishes whisper like
soft melodies
in the ears of children
to wash away
their miseries
~~~~~~~~~~~

Ya see , long time since I wrote it ,,,

as I read it ,,, How does stuff like that come out of me ,,
especially ,, off the top of my head as I write ?

so it's channeled man
gotta be

I just let it be magic.

Beautiful one, CA cheers.gif
04-20-2017, 08:46 AM #10
Mars Member
Posts:239 Threads:12 Joined:Aug 2013
I do good to write a sentence. chuckle.gif I've always admired songwriters.
04-20-2017, 04:36 PM #11
Cynicalabsurdance Member
Posts:7,515 Threads:180 Joined:Feb 2011
I'm tellin' ya's
this stuff has to be from somewhere , Channeled ?

Thanks ,
it's like writing in trance or something .

" Can't find the reason why ,, I feel so weak , looking into her eyes "
" Some kinda spell , she cast on me ,,
" The way my heart swells ,,, trapped in those eyes ,,
" Never want to get free ,,,
" Lo' ,, Hope she has a better use for me ,,,
then just a Toy ,,,
A toy she plays with , then back on the shelf ,,,,
maybe she'll struggle to free us , yes ,,, even herself . """"""""""

Like that , just rolls off the fingers onto the keys .

from where ?



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