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She Walks In Exquisite Footsteps Across The Dim Light Towards Me
04-18-2013, 05:43 PM #1
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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She Walks In Exquisite Footsteps Across The Dim Light Towards Me

Looking up the sparkles bubble into her depthless green eyes

Her smile apears as a setting new moon

A single touch ignites my sixth sense like a new star

a whole universe of possiblities erupt in the silent dark

The rising smoke leaves me breathless on the other side of the world

From here I can see her, even in pitch black
04-18-2013, 06:01 PM #2
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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I almost forgot the Music Video that goes with it.




ww.youtube.com/watch?v=2wRoqGhbULk
04-18-2013, 06:20 PM #3
Ruby Wolf Member
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Heres a poem I wrote when I was around 15...

When my nana suddenly died when she was about 59...

The night before she died she told us how she had awakened in the darkness to see her long deceased father hovering up and down outside her bedroom window asking her to join him with his beckoning hand...

"And then you were gone...

While I listened to forgotten songs...

Every night I cry and cry...

Wishing hoping and wondering why...

In your eyes I saw a light...

Soft warm and burning bright...

Now my days are long and cold...

Thoughts of you I've often told

Some time soon we both will see

Another world awaits you and me"
04-18-2013, 07:03 PM #4
JayRodney ⓐⓛⓘⓔⓝ
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Wow! That's a pretty wild tale.

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04-18-2013, 07:58 PM #5
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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(04-18-2013, 06:20 PM)Beyond Smolensk Wrote:  Heres a poem I wrote when I was around 15...

When my nana suddenly died when she was about 59...

The night before she died she told us how she had awakened in the darkness to see her long deceased father hovering up and down outside her bedroom window asking her to join him with his beckoning hand...

"And then you were gone...

While I listened to forgotten songs...

Every night I cry and cry...

Wishing hoping and wondering why...

In your eyes I saw a light...

Soft warm and burning bright...

Now my days are long and cold...

Thoughts of you I've often told

Some time soon we both will see

Another world awaits you and me"


That is very pretty and high quality for such a young age.

I found mine all got much, much better when I quit trying to make it rhyme.
04-18-2013, 08:08 PM #6
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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I wrote this one several years ago for a woo-woo forum woman who went by the name The Goddess.

We were really good together until I found out she didn't intend to leave her husband like she promised.






With a glance the Mermaids fled the shore

with a breath the ships passed to the other side of the world

with a stare the clouds all scattered

with a word the planets aligned

and with a single thought

the stars were all gone

save one
04-20-2013, 02:40 AM #7
Ruby Wolf Member
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(04-18-2013, 08:08 PM)MichaelAlanKeith Wrote:  I wrote this one several years ago for a woo-woo forum woman who went by the name The Goddess.

We were really good together until I found out she didn't intend to leave her husband like she promised.






With a glance the Mermaids fled the shore

with a breath the ships passed to the other side of the world

with a stare the clouds all scattered

with a word the planets aligned

and with a single thought

the stars were all gone

save one

"With a glance the mermaids fled the shore"...< Wow < Thats some intensely magical imagery...Like i can actually see it happening in my minds eye...
04-20-2013, 05:28 PM #8
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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I never could have wrote that or any of my poetry before I had my psychic encounter with The Goddess.

It changed everything for me. I wish the same on everyone. It would end wars forever.

I was the biggest skeptic and doubter there was. Then she came into my mind and I could no longer doubt.

I tried to express what was happening in that thread I linked at Crowsnest. But even that was only a small part of it. After I had many confirmantions of a psychic link. There were things impossible to know that someone did know.


I think it all has to do with the balance of your mind. For most of my life I had repressed my right brain. I was left-brained in everything I did. Then I let it open and it was like a flood. Since I have learned to control it better. I don't argue with myself anymore. I have discussions.

And the voice I hear when I read and write is different. This one is much more gentle and open minded. And I wouldn't trade it for the whole world.
04-20-2013, 05:59 PM #9
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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This one was hurting to come out when it did. It was almost like a download I simply typed.



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One king

wakes two nights

who ride three paths

to the four golden castles

where the five petal flower grows

under the six pointed star that guides

to the seven ArchAngels who protect the children

from the Eighteenth day of october, the end


......................................







The Movie EARTH begins after a seemingly interminable period of silence with absolute absence of light

Many will get up and leave long before its over, but if you miss the beginning you won't see the end.

It starts at the last a blink of the dragons eye as the camera zooms out on you

http://www.flashearth.com/?lat=-34.18197....1&r=0&msl

04-20-2013, 06:48 PM #10
JayRodney ⓐⓛⓘⓔⓝ
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Forgive me here, but what was not meant to happen will not. All the words in the world are irrelevant.

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04-20-2013, 08:19 PM #11
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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(04-20-2013, 06:48 PM)JayRodney Wrote:  Forgive me here, but what was not meant to happen will not. All the words in the world are irrelevant.



I agree. I know who she is now. If she had told the truth from the beginning things would have been different.


She moved on and I should have too. Now I have. I'm going to work on the new me and the next half of my life. And try to not miss more opportunities.
04-20-2013, 08:27 PM #12
Octo Mother Superior
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Honesty is one of the most important things to me in a relationship. Honesty with yourself mainly.
04-20-2013, 08:35 PM #13
MichaelAlanKeith Member
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(04-20-2013, 08:27 PM)Octo Wrote:  Honesty is one of the most important things to me in a relationship. Honesty with yourself mainly.



We went to highschool togeher. Suddenly she blossomed when I posted my real name on a forum she was at. Later, I said her name. She said, "There is no one here by that name". It didn't quite hit me right away, but I couldn't forget. I tried to bait her into telling, but she wouldn't.

I can't blame people for hiding behind an avatar and a representative name. I did it myself until recently. I told people my real name, but I didn't wear it like I do now.

I think I would have dated her and maybe married her if my family had not moved away my senior year. I had regrets for a very long time. Now they're almost gone.

But she was on that plane. She did want to see if it was really me. She wanted to see if I was telling the truth about what I look like. I always did.



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