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02-26-2014, 07:24 AM #16
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This is the lighter side of the music that inspired me

The Festival Music

I'll post the lyrics , for those familiar with the lyrics I write

you can see the similarity clearly

The writer ( Tim ) and I are on the same wavelength for sure

Watch this one on YT
the images added are awesome
02-26-2014, 07:33 AM #17
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and here are the lyrics to the above song

~~~~~ It's your saving Grace ~~~~~~~

" Winter's people watching
As I sail from season's four
To join some crazy ladies
In a game upon the shore

None of them with broken wings
But still refuse to fly
So with sweetness on my lips
I smile a last goodbye

And now I spend my life
On the velvet side of hell
Aimlessly here searching
For what I cannot tell

The quietness is terrible
It's more than I can stand
But thousands now stand cheering
As my blood flows in the sand

You're not the child
You thought you were
You wake up in the night
And know you're blind
And yet they keep on pushing
Trying the insides of your mind
Forever, forever arresting to control
Until the emptiness of heaven
Welcomes your weary soul

Rise up with the new dawn's early morning
Feel the sunshine warm upon your face
Tomorrow's come a long, long way to help you
Yes, it's your saving grace

Every day, every way
Tomorrow, it's your saving grace
Well, now got no time to worry
Cause I've got no time to hurry
Baby, it's your saving grace

Now don't you lay those blames on me
Don't you play those games on me
Cause baby it's your saving grace

You got to need a little lovin'
02-26-2014, 07:44 AM #18
Cynicalabsurdance Member
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To exhibit the simularity in style of Tim's lyrics and mine

here is one I wrote

same style ,,,,different minds ,,,

~~~~ Sage lands Burning ~~~~

Fades to Blue
from a dark dark sky
Those Thoughts of you
and the reasons why

Suns coming up
and the feelings right
Jars of Souls

in a Lovers cup
and alone again ,
i meet the night

Silken Sigh whispered on my cheek
if you loved her so
then give her what she seeks

Lovers whom listen
have a special tone
to they're voice

Silently glistens
when shone
it's solely your choice

drive that away
or keep to own

Night has a Sky you can feel in a way
That last you through
to the following day

Love has a Feel , you cannot throw away
Once inside ,
it's in there to stay

try to ignore it
it just will not go away

I cannot unlove
what time has buried deep inside
I cannot shove back
an incoming tide

Love deep as this
in the soul
is too hard to hide
and never let's go

Star shoots down
trailing green
through purple sky

falls to the ground
mysteries seen
with the inner eye

Small Mountain to the West
covered in White Sage
Love comforts best
what causes the rage

Sowed in Peace
Nurtured with love
The soul's Peace
feels as silken lined Glove

Heaven lies inward
never out there
blanketed in loving Kindness
handled with loving care .

As Angels dance
on the head of a pin
hold on to your love
feel your heaven within

Sweet the memories i have of you
may loving kindness guide all that you do

Maybe we'll meet one day again
My love keep you warm child
keep you smiling until then

~~~~~~ End

THAT , even if i have to say it myself

is a master piece

verbal illustration where you feel the colors
and fill them in



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